Hello Diego, You did a great job on your elevator pitch! Your hand movements were natural and added to your elevator pitch. In addition, you talked at a good pace. In my elevator pitch, I talked too fast, so I think my audience weren’t able to think about what I was saying. I am surprised that 60% of Americans tend to fall asleep while watching tv, because I thought it would be higher! To be honest, I fit in that 60% of the Americans and I know many who also do. I like how you kept your audience engaged by asking them questions. When you answered the questions too, it showed that you could relate to your audience, which is a bonus. Furthermore, you presented your product very well, but I wish you could have figured out the cost for product. Since there was time left, I hope you can talk a little bit more about the financial part and maybe leave your audience with a challenge.
Great elevator pitch, Diego. I overall really liked your video because you seemed genuine in your vision of the product and acted very professionally. Your use of examples was also very interesting because its relatable for many Americans and you were able to incorporate applicable statistics. Overall, I think you really presented your vision well and did a great job showcasing that the problem is one that over half of Americans experience. In the future you could include information about where it would be sold at and in what price ranges.
Hello Diego,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your elevator pitch! Your hand movements were natural and added to your elevator pitch. In addition, you talked at a good pace. In my elevator pitch, I talked too fast, so I think my audience weren’t able to think about what I was saying. I am surprised that 60% of Americans tend to fall asleep while watching tv, because I thought it would be higher! To be honest, I fit in that 60% of the Americans and I know many who also do. I like how you kept your audience engaged by asking them questions. When you answered the questions too, it showed that you could relate to your audience, which is a bonus. Furthermore, you presented your product very well, but I wish you could have figured out the cost for product. Since there was time left, I hope you can talk a little bit more about the financial part and maybe leave your audience with a challenge.
Great elevator pitch, Diego. I overall really liked your video because you seemed genuine in your vision of the product and acted very professionally. Your use of examples was also very interesting because its relatable for many Americans and you were able to incorporate applicable statistics. Overall, I think you really presented your vision well and did a great job showcasing that the problem is one that over half of Americans experience. In the future you could include information about where it would be sold at and in what price ranges.
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